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I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
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I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Finally..duh...duh...duh (jazz hands) here is my Bridal Make-up Website http://www.belissimabrides.com
I look at criticism as constructive, so I want you all to be as honest as you want! It's taken me the best part of a year to create this website, the biggest challenge has been positioning the images which probably looks like the easiest element but believe me it was very tricky!
I am lacking on the before & after photo's in the PORTFOLIO page after losing pictures from 3 make-overs, completely my own fault but I do need to get somemore and re-position them on the page.
There are a few bits that still need tweaking but I am happy to now show it off to all of you!!
I look at criticism as constructive, so I want you all to be as honest as you want! It's taken me the best part of a year to create this website, the biggest challenge has been positioning the images which probably looks like the easiest element but believe me it was very tricky!
I am lacking on the before & after photo's in the PORTFOLIO page after losing pictures from 3 make-overs, completely my own fault but I do need to get somemore and re-position them on the page.
There are a few bits that still need tweaking but I am happy to now show it off to all of you!!
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wow hun, i really think that looks great. i dont even know what to tell you to make it better!! wonderful job, and very professional!
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dang georgi that kicks ASS!!! WOO HOO! I am so freakin proud of you!!!! I LOVE IT! It is so professional and is really awesome. I am so proud I Wish so much I could have you do my makeup I would definitely go to you if i lived however many thousands of miles away it is to you from me
The only thing i noticed was spelling on the Home page and on the Services page..but it may be the difference in America vs England so forgive me if i am wrong!!! But, on the Home page, does modeling have only one 'L' cuz the way it is spelled on the Home page is "modelling". Then on the services page, there is the word "opportunities" that you forgot the other O - HOW COULD YOU FORGET THE O And then on that same page is the word achieved that is spelled "acheived" and I think it should be 'ie'. But that's all with the negative. Sorry!!! YOur site ROCKS georgi and like i said i am so very proud of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxx
The only thing i noticed was spelling on the Home page and on the Services page..but it may be the difference in America vs England so forgive me if i am wrong!!! But, on the Home page, does modeling have only one 'L' cuz the way it is spelled on the Home page is "modelling". Then on the services page, there is the word "opportunities" that you forgot the other O - HOW COULD YOU FORGET THE O And then on that same page is the word achieved that is spelled "acheived" and I think it should be 'ie'. But that's all with the negative. Sorry!!! YOur site ROCKS georgi and like i said i am so very proud of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxx
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Wow! Georgi - it really looks great! I think your prices are very reasonable too!
I am sure your business will be a huge success!
I am sure your business will be a huge success!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
"So your getting married" should be "you're"
2nd paragraph: "its just as important to get this detail right. " Should be "it's" because you mean "it is."
Just a couple of things I caught.
Overall, I like it!
2nd paragraph: "its just as important to get this detail right. " Should be "it's" because you mean "it is."
Just a couple of things I caught.
Overall, I like it!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Thank you so much everyone Thanks Ginny and Beth for pointing out spelling mistakes it takes a fresh pair of eyes to pick up on little thing's like that! I will get all of those errors adjusted today!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
At first glance Georgi it looks AMAZING!! Well done! If there is anything I notice, like Ginny, will let you know!
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I just wanted to share some EXCITING news with you all, I have had my FIRST OFFICIAL ENQUIRY!! so ok it's just an enquiry at the moment but it could turn into a booking for August 8th..Oooooo it makes me nervous!!! but I am also VERY excited that someone has found me on google and checked out my site!!!!
And while I am posting here Holi completely forgot to mention to you but if you want I can add some kind of link or info about your bouquets??? I don't know how much it would cost for shipping to the UK but someone might be interested??? What do you think??
And while I am posting here Holi completely forgot to mention to you but if you want I can add some kind of link or info about your bouquets??? I don't know how much it would cost for shipping to the UK but someone might be interested??? What do you think??
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Georgi, it looks stunning and congrats on your first inquiry, that's fantastic news!! Great that google is picking up your site so well too. You'll do wonderful hon, really it looks amazing!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Thank you Sapphire My enquiry is now a BOOKING!!! She's booked herself and her maid of honour I am REALLY happy!!!
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Well done you, I'm sure you will do an excellent job. It must make you so proud that you are helping to make someone's big day so special! Yay Georgi!
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Congrats on the booking
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Wow! A booking already? Awesome!!!!!!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
The website looks fantastic, Georgi!!! Wow, very professional indeed! And congrats about the booking - how exciting!!!!
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OMG.Thats SO fantastic babe! I am SO pleased for you! How wonderful! I am so thrilled I can't even begin to say it! You don't need to be nervous you will do a perfect job hugs!
As for the link,it's very sweet of you and I will take you up on it,but I need to get my site going first which may take a while so for now I won't put something hurried up.I want to make a few more and get them sold then I will certainly have my own site and a link xxx thanks babe
As for the link,it's very sweet of you and I will take you up on it,but I need to get my site going first which may take a while so for now I won't put something hurried up.I want to make a few more and get them sold then I will certainly have my own site and a link xxx thanks babe
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Georgi girl, I only just saw this. Congrats on your website, I love your photos, you are so talented. I joined the group on facebook as well!! xxxxx
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Georgi,
I didn't even see this thread until Tiff commented today. It's great. I'm so happy for you. I have a dumb question, though, who is the lady isn the large pic on the left of every page? It doesn't look like you. I see you in the wedding dress. Anyway, I guess I'm just wondering who the lady is. Great site!
I didn't even see this thread until Tiff commented today. It's great. I'm so happy for you. I have a dumb question, though, who is the lady isn the large pic on the left of every page? It doesn't look like you. I see you in the wedding dress. Anyway, I guess I'm just wondering who the lady is. Great site!
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Hi Georgi - I am such a board slacker, I just now saw this too. I wish this forum would hit me over the top of the head when there is imprtant stuff to see in and area I don't beeline to. lol.
Looks great. I am so excitied you got a booking already! Woo Hoo! Are you doing a consultation in advance for it?
Couple small things. The pink headings could be just a little darker pink.....kick up the % magenta in the color maybe? Where you describe the services, and especially in the smaller FAQ text they kinda get lost right now.
On your home page I would reword the last phrase of your first paragraph just slightly. Instead of saying ''and least of all your wedding makeup'' maybe saying ''and last, but certainly not least, your wedding day makeup!''
Overall it looks great, very professional looking! I likethe part where you talk about the booking fee securing your date in Georgina's diary ..... it makes Georgina sound very special and important and oh yeah - I want to be in her diary as opposed to the dry wording most people have for booking fees and stuff...
Looks great. I am so excitied you got a booking already! Woo Hoo! Are you doing a consultation in advance for it?
Couple small things. The pink headings could be just a little darker pink.....kick up the % magenta in the color maybe? Where you describe the services, and especially in the smaller FAQ text they kinda get lost right now.
On your home page I would reword the last phrase of your first paragraph just slightly. Instead of saying ''and least of all your wedding makeup'' maybe saying ''and last, but certainly not least, your wedding day makeup!''
Overall it looks great, very professional looking! I likethe part where you talk about the booking fee securing your date in Georgina's diary ..... it makes Georgina sound very special and important and oh yeah - I want to be in her diary as opposed to the dry wording most people have for booking fees and stuff...
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Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
I think DM is right, especially the FAQs, I have trouble reading the headings.
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Alright girls thanks for the advice I will take it all on board and see what I can do to make thing's read a little easier and better.
Just an update I now have 5 secured bookings and no word of a lie I get probably 2-3 enquiries per week I have already been to do 2 trials and both brides to be loved the make-up so it's going great guns!
Just an update I now have 5 secured bookings and no word of a lie I get probably 2-3 enquiries per week I have already been to do 2 trials and both brides to be loved the make-up so it's going great guns!
Re: I promised you I would so here it is......BELISSIMA BRIDES
Wow Georgi! That is awesome!!!!!!
I am so glad to hear things are successful!
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We've been missing you around here! : )
I am so glad to hear things are successful!
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We've been missing you around here! : )
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Wow! That is sooo awesome. You go! Of course don't get too over-scheduled because (selfishly) we will miss you if you have no time for us!
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